Hetalia Fancomic Translation Proofreading Request

Recently, I have been translating a short GerIta comic from English to French, and today I am finally done! However, French is my third language and I am sure there will be many errors in my translation. Thus, I'm posting this request for anyone to help me proofread the comic (as I'm too embarrassed to post this in r/French >.<). If there is anything that you'd like to say, whether it's a grammatical mistake or just unnatural phrasing, please dm it to me!

My translations are here. For reference, this is the English version. Although this site does not have pop-ups, there are still some NSFW ads, so I recommend only opening it at home. The comic itself is SFW and I'd classify it as PG13.

Any help is greatly appreciated!