HALF SAILED: A COMING OF AGE SITCOM BY ME

So I posted the pilot of this series a while ago but I completely re-did it even though I got 9 episodes in on the first version so this is the remastered version. It’s basically a comedy/coming of age style sitcom about myself (Royce) and my two friends going off to college in Orlando, Florida to an arts school and meeting new people including friendships and possible romantic partners, getting into random college scenarios and drama and overall trying to follow our passion as a creative and finding our group of people. Here’s the pilot, give me your thoughts and what I could work on in terms of ideas for comedic moments and building the character to become more multi-dimensional (because tbh they’re probably a bit one-dimensional)💀

Pages: 30 Pages

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qNKpHpta-qJTnFityGgZzLj_v8Y9Tn8_/view?usp=drivesdk