[1261] Tradeth Wisely - A Short Story

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ROOW2ZUSoe8hWrXe_kLCgpPKbaCgmpoVtxR2yriJiZI/edit?usp=sharing

Hi guys, this is my first short story. In fact, my first attempt at fiction ever. I'm on a journey to finish 30 short stories as an exercise to learn how to write fiction.

So, I'll be critiquing 60 pieces on this subreddit. Two for every piece I submit.

Critiques for the moderator's evaluation are as follows:

[2173] Critique No. 1

[1283] Critique No. 2