Big City greens fanfic

https://www.wattpad.com/story/389298565?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=BallsackEater69

If y'all have any advice just let me know. I usually put my writing through an editor just to make it a bit more detailed especially since I haven't written anything in over 4 years. It will be freaky so be warned